Doomed poetic love

[purplie]

The Haiku adored GPT, poor she
GPT answered back, I sha'n't, I can't
Haiku tried to reason, she tried, she died
Only 17 beats allowed, aloud

[dukealien]

Adorable. The infernal internal rhymes, four lines of exactly ten beats each

and endless - never once a full stop

[matsunosuperfan]

The Haiku adored GPT, poor she
GPT answered back, I sha'n't, I can't
Haiku tried to reason, she tried, she died
Only 17 beats allowed, aloud

Solid work with rhyme and meter
the point, if there is one, is missing me

I don't understand what is keeping GPT and Haiku from having a lil fling
is the implication that 17 beats is too short? can GPT not count syllables? I feel lost as to what sense I am meant to bring to the song. But it's a nice song.