Summer Walk

[Wjames]

Shoulder
two large knapsacks
with thin black straps to bulge
your red, racking neck to the left
of home.

[dukealien]

I definitely feel this one.  "Racking" is a little hard - I hear "aching" from both straps and sunburn.

But it's only a walk, not a hike.  And if the neck gets pulled a little off home position, you can stop and adjust.  There's time - it's only a walk.

Nicely done.