My weakness
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My weakness

I weather
your thunder
and lightning

but your tears
I cannot
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(07-06-2025, 09:11 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  My weakness

I weather
your thunder
and lightning

but your tears
I cannot

Very nice.  And her (conventionally) weakness... isn't.
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(07-06-2025, 09:11 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  My weakness

I weather
your thunder
and lightning

but your tears
I cannot

Beautiful to me. I think a hallmark of love is dropping any hostility which might be present in the moment as soon as you realize the person you love is hurting. Of course there is also the interpretation that these tears are little more than a tactic. When they're not able to bully you, they resort to guilt tripping you. I'm very impressed how you managed to pack in so much meaning and multiple interpretations in such a short poem.
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