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Wake up—pickle
Morning—tickle. Brittle
Sketch—chalk, dust
Sun-cast shade—stretch; perspective
Reflections, no more—in a cave. Astride
Floundering and blinding wet
Of sordid days
And sleepless nights.
Nipped at the bud.

Note:
- Plato's allegory of the cave
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Wake up—pickle
Morning—tickle. Brittle
Sketch—chalk, dust
Sun-cast shade—stretch; perspective
Reflections, no more—in a cave. Astride
Floundering and blinding wet
Of sordid days
And sleepless nights.
Nipped at the bud.

Note:
- Plato's allegory of the cave


Maybe?
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#3
(04-05-2025, 03:50 PM)Luchoracu Wrote:  Wake up pickle
Morning tickle

stretch

Above is the entire poem for me: I can see it as waking up a child. It's relation to Plato's cave is reaching way too far. Even with your note I would never have made that connection.
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