your soon to be favorite poetaster
#1
Hi, 

I'm apparently going by ArmadillosAreCool on here because it was the first thing that popped into my head when prompted to make a handle. Thanks to Knot, I suppose the abbreviated version is now aac (to be pronounced like ack, think coughing).

I love to read poetry, specifically Victorian and Romantic era. I read other time periods, but that's my jam. From my favorite time period, I enjoy G. M. Hopkins, Keats, Wordsworth, Shelley, POE, and Tennyson. More randomly I like Shakespeare (by default), W. B. Yeats, Frost, Pablo Neruda (sometimes), and some Countee Cullen stuff.

I read a lot of novels (maybe 600+ by now, at least 500). At the moment I like Steinbeck, Tolkien, and am starting to get into McCarthy.

Basic taste, I know, but I like stuff that's stood the test of time I guess.

As for what I like to write, I love working with form but I mainly end up writing free verse just because that's what the status quo demands and I want to be published. I also write fiction but that's not for here.

I generally write pretty poorly on my first couple drafts, sometimes I eke out something acceptable but I usually get stuck with a half-baked idea. That's why I've come here: to learn and better myself, but also to try to help other people out as best as I can. I know how much of a pain it is to try to get feedback on poetry. When you do get feedback, it's usually overly praising or ingratiating. That's what I like about this place, you can get tough, no-holds-barred, and helpful critique.

As you can tell, I talk too much so I'm going to wrap this up now. Don't mind the overlong sentences, it's just bad habit.

Looking forward to working with you all!

aac 



Biographical stuff:

I'm 17 year old male and I live in the States. That should explain the half-formed ideas a bit, seeing as I've got another 8ish years to go 'til my brain is done being built.
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#2
Hello aac, welcome to the pigpen.  I’m always happy to see a new member who starts off by offering critique in the workshops as you did.  Thank you for that.  I like your enthusiasm too. You’re right that the feedback here will be honest and not always complimentary, but it is always well meant and intended to help your writing become the best it can be. I look forward to your future poems as well as your future critiques.  Please feel free to ask any of the mods or admin if you have questions or need help with something. 

Happy writing.
—Quix
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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#3
I read your poem and your thing here with the voice of Grant Morrison.

I don't believe anything you say.


Grant Morrison.

I grant you Jim Morrison status.
I like 17 year olds.

17 is a cabalistic number.

We have the numbers. I dont smoke. Mary or Cormac?
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#4
rowens,

Mary or Cormac?

Cormac. I read The Road and am going to try to find a nice copy of No Country For Old Men. I'm not going to read Blood Meridian, I read too many sad/violent books as it is. I try to balance them out with some lighter stuff, just read I Capture The Castle by Dodie Smith and had a grand old time.

I don't think I could sound like Grant Morrison if I tried, but I'll take Jim Morrison status. 

Who knows, maybe I'll join his club if I'm not careful.



aac
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#5
I have made my own big gimmick out of Cormac McCarthy, HP Lovecraft and Jean Genet.

On the dusk jacket of the last Cormac McCarthy book, which is a two, one compares him to HP Lovecraft. So, I am right on some level.


But, Blood Meridian is his uberstyle. It's like the skeleton key you put in the door of his other books, even when the keyhole is LewisCarroll other sizes.
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#6
I could never get in to Lovecraft. Maybe I ought to try again.

I understand that Blood Meridian is McCarthy's opus but I think it will be awhile before I'm in the market for that much wanton violence and bloodshed. I'm sure I'll read it eventually.

Right now I'm going to be content with starting up A Hundred Years of Solitude.

I need to cut myself off before I hijack my own introduction.

ackkkk,

aac
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#7
A Hundred Years of Solitude.

That Spanish Guy?

I'm not finished, hold on.

Lovecraft and Cormac McCarthy are not the same. But I found that grim connection ( see: Hunter Thompson/Manson Family). and some top layering critic made it. So, I'm sounding my connection
hard,
right now.

I also make the great connection between the poetry that Simon Grimm writes in Henry Fool and Wordsworth and Milton.


Henry Fool
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#8
This seems too good to be true, fiction is allowed in the sewer by the way, which can be unlocked in the user cp screen in the top left I believe
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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#9
We haven't crossed yet, Crocidile Dun dee

Ok.

I'm going to talk about HP Lovecraft.

No. You'll want to put it in the Sewer.


Just like that time I did Sling Blade on Broadway, and nobody showed up. And it was all awkward.
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#10
This video came out



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#11
Interesting video. I finally read Blood Meridian and it was awful. And I mean that in the proper sense of the word, awe-inspiring. Titanic, gargantuan. The violence glazed my eyes but I couldn't stop reading.
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#12
(10-13-2024, 03:18 AM)armadillosarecool Wrote:  Interesting video. I finally read Blood Meridian and it was awful. And I mean that in the proper sense of the word, awe-inspiring. Titanic, gargantuan. The violence glazed my eyes but I couldn't stop reading.

But the ending - the ending, those last five pages or so!  Everything else is buildup.
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#13
"Good God almighty"
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