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06-01-2022, 02:26 PM
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A.D.D.
Papa knew it well.
You cannot tire
a heavy fish
on light line.
You set your drag
just north of zero
and war all day
over inches.
It's not a game
young men would play.
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Very nice observation. Personally, I've found the trick to accomplishing an onerous task (weeding, for example) is to take off my watch; perhaps divesting themselves of all personal communication devices could serve the same purpose with younger men. I say this having recently beat the threescore-and-ten, though not by much

. The Flintstone-style shift-change whistle has much to recommend it.
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Thanks, Duke. This was about 3 times longer before I took the axe to it. Wasn't sure the metaphor was still recognizable. I thinks bits of this were at least partially inspired by the commentary on "Revenge." Some interesting thoughts on that thread.
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(06-01-2022, 02:26 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: A.D.D.
Papa knew it well.
You cannot tire
a heavy fish
on light line.
You set your drag
just north of zero
and war all day
over inches.
It's not a game
young men would play.
Hi Tiger,
As an avid fisherman, I like the literal image as much as the metaphorical.
Very nice. Thanks,
bryn
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(06-01-2022, 02:26 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: and war all day
over inches.
That would be a perfect task set for damned souls in Dante's Inferno.
I have ADD, clearly