09-12-2020, 05:31 AM
I just wrote this song, would appreciate any feedback, it is pretty short so I might try to write a few extra verses, but I don't know if I'll be able to write something that adds to it.
I just recorded it on my phone, so it's pretty quiet & audio aint the best quality, may need to max your volume. You probably need to allow flash on this site to get the player box below to work.
Here are the lyrics:
She’s often on the trail of some flamingos
or else she could be somewhere submarine
digging all the fishes coral houses
tasting salt and smelling like sunscreen.
I’d stretch my legs and buy a pink sweatshirt
I’d sell my house and move to Ashbury street
where the coloured rows of houses look like coral
maybe then she’d think to look at me.
But if she looked at what I am
another peacock dressed up like a man.
Got no heart, just half a plan,
to put somebody else’s in a can,
and take it home.
She’s often on the trail of some flamingos
or else she could be somewhere submarine
digging all the fishes coral houses
tasting salt and smelling like sunscreen.
I just recorded it on my phone, so it's pretty quiet & audio aint the best quality, may need to max your volume. You probably need to allow flash on this site to get the player box below to work.
Here are the lyrics:
She’s often on the trail of some flamingos
or else she could be somewhere submarine
digging all the fishes coral houses
tasting salt and smelling like sunscreen.
I’d stretch my legs and buy a pink sweatshirt
I’d sell my house and move to Ashbury street
where the coloured rows of houses look like coral
maybe then she’d think to look at me.
But if she looked at what I am
another peacock dressed up like a man.
Got no heart, just half a plan,
to put somebody else’s in a can,
and take it home.
She’s often on the trail of some flamingos
or else she could be somewhere submarine
digging all the fishes coral houses
tasting salt and smelling like sunscreen.