In Your Second Favorite Dream

[Tiger the Lion]

In Your Second Favorite Dream

you pinch yourself
to confirm it's real
and accept the sting
as an objective yea

never noticing the nay
of a dream-hand
that pinches with six fingers

[billy]

can i share your meds

[alonso ramoran]

like this one. do you think you could add more punch to that last line if you took out the "dream" in "dream-hand"?

[Seraphim]

Fun lol. Wondered what it would be like if N failed to notice the pinch which caused by the sting had 6 fingers?

Somehow this brings Ray Bradbury to mind....