Flash Challenge
#1
Open to all. Write two poems in this thread (Flash challenge)

1. Form (Tanka)

Tanka, five lines with a syllable count of 5,7,5,7,7. Traditionally Tanka has no concept of rhyme and is usually of a natural/emotional theme. However, unlike a Haiku, this form has an additional two lines which allow for more subjective or personal observations or feelings. Similar to the Haiku, titles are not always needed.

2. Prompt (instruction)

Please write a poem with a title that is an instruction, Keep off the grass or Fasten seat belts etc. You get it. Any form, any length.

I'll go first
Form Tanka

My Captain Scarlett
was buried by Mysterons,
deep in the garden.
An indestructible man
of an age I imagined.

Prompt: Turn your papers over now

The nervous coughs
and shuffled chairs give one last
laugh down marble stairs.
Looking up at learned names
of literary fame, etched in brass.

Then I turn my page
on a mind that's blank,
a soldier in the trenches
lost to gun shots
only silence in his ears.

The quick start writers
are off on my left,
panic slips a hand
inside my chest, demands
I start with unfinished reading,
but my mantra knows best.

Through the joints of old oak doors
beyond the click on cold tiled floors,
across bowed heads in hallowed halls
a calmness calls my chi.
The graphite spills, controlled at will
by years of books
librarians looks and post-it's stuck.
Passages pulled and torn apart
with confidence I make a start.

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#2
Form Tanka (never done one of these before)

ripples turn to swells
fingers skim through the water
moments sink from sight
drowned beneath the weight of years
my clenched hand ever empty
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#3
Do Not Use This Hair Dryer in the Bathtub

Even if you are committed 
to time management
One of the habits
of highly effective people
is not to become a lightning rod.
You are not a coyote
in a cartoon, and your hair will not rise
whimsically like an audience giving
a standing ovation to a child's
performance instead you will burn
like a slice of bread 
left too long in the toaster,
which should also not be used
in the bathtub.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#4
fluid tanka

groupings of letters
split up into syllables
dance in front of me.
how to pour it in this form,
the seconds, drops of water.



keep your physicality to yourself

in a german sauna
you´re supposed to sit
on your towel in order
to not let your sweat soak the wood.
enjoy the silence
save for the occasional grunt.
if you can´t help it
at least talk quietly.
don´t laugh, don´t grin too broadly
and should you happen to feel excited
hide it.

...
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#5
After flood sidewalks
reappear clay-scabbed, mud-packed,
trooped with reminders:
coal-orange cones forgotten,
skewed sawhorses graze at large.



Watch Your Step


Yes, there’s a gap,
a drop.  That next step’s
a doozie.  You could twist
an ankle, break a hip
if so inclined and aged.

But here’s this sign, so
if you do any of those things
or just bust your keister
on this wet or oily
icy, shaky,
optically elusive bit of
seeming simple flatness,
it's on you.
Watch your own step—
this one’s posted.
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
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#6


< check the tag for washing instructions >

        the radio comments loudly
        only their names recognizable
        stenciled on noise
        this flesh for that
        washed bare
        no words
        not even tattoos

                - - -

                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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#7
Tanka:

cloud shadows huddle
uphill ahead of the storm -
dry under the trees

the first rain drop bounces up
spinning a world made of dust



Do not try at home


without adult. Super. Vision
may be granted to the blind
miraculously, but we children still try
without adults up, 'Ervis!'; I, on
my pedestal, proclaim: 'It means
without. Adults lack ervis. That's why
they say 'Do not try.'
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#8
attempt at fusing the two together:

take up his cross

constantine ordered
his mother find the true cross.
indignant, she flew
to a potter's field and swung
her axe at an olive tree.
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#9
Many thanks to all for coming out to joint the flash mob, and I must say Its been great to read all the takes on the theme, and the tanka's, everyones efforts have been varied and interesting and that quite an achievement in such a short space of time.

But don't sit down just yet, I have one more dance for us all tomorrow, it would be good to see some of the newly penned members joining in. Thanks again Keith

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