Afterlife.

[Tiger the Lion]

Afterlife.

[billy]

twat

[ellajam]

So expressive.

For me, full of hope and inspiration. Couldn't imagine it said any better.

[Todd]

The period in the title is the best element.

[RiverNotch]

---and this is considering the emoji as part of it.

[vagabond]

nothing below the title? i don´t understand. there´s a lot of life in the after, that´s one of the least sterile places.
oh! *smites forehead* of course... it´s microscopic.

[Tiger the Lion]

twat

Aw, thanks Billy. I know how you feel about twat 

So expressive.

For me, full of hope and inspiration. Couldn't imagine it said any better.

No one could. 

The period in the title is the best element.

Thanks for noticing, Todd. 

@River. The emoji is not part of the poem. It was necessary for the post to accept the white space.  I felt it was less likely to be intrusive than any keyboard character. 

@Vag. Stop smiting yourself. We have gods for that.

** I wasn't really expecting line by line crits on this one, but all reads and comments are appreciated. On a high note, I think I may have finally perfected word economy. 

Paul

[Quixilated]

I love tiny poems and this one is entirely perfect.

@River. The emoji is not part of the poem. It was necessary for the post to accept the white space.  I felt it was less likely to be intrusive than any keyboard character. 

if you truly don’t want the emoji in the poem (Though I like it with the emoji) you can use regular text in white font.
(Though you would still want to choose something unobtrusive like a period because it is visible in the reply box.)
Like so:


Afterlife.

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