Fame Is A Mask That Shits On The Faced
#1
I Don’t Want To Be The Star...

I don’t want to be 
the star of my own life.
I want to be 
the star of everyone else’s.


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[title changed]
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#2
me old man watched a docco
about the universe
seems fundamentalists had it right
it revolves around the world
completely crazy concept
freakier than flat earth
creates holy laughter
and pentecostal mirth
My Muse, to labour chained
demure, pure, restrained
may yet escape -
i'll grab his cape
and hitch-hike to new planes

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#3
Reality’s a fold,
in infinite folds
of ειδoς and υλη,
of bones and
expressions
of bones.
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#4
(11-27-2017, 08:27 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:  Fame Is A Mask That Shits On The Face

I don’t want to be 
the star of my own life.
I want to be 
the star of everyone else’s.


i´m beautiful and positive
my surface is as pure as blank
the air i breath is somewhat stale
my mask is semipermeable
and yes i have to concentrate
but i would rather suffocate
than show my face
...
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#5
The piece itself is fun and playful, sure, but you might want to use the title in something else, instead, it's more playful than the actual piece.
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#6
(12-04-2017, 11:33 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:  The piece itself is fun and playful, sure, but you might want to use the title in something else, instead, it's more playful than the actual piece.

yep. i agree entirely. it’s the stupidest title. mostly by design. but, i’ll change it.
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