11-29-2010, 05:11 PM
I picked some scented flowers today
whilst skirting round the fen.
Sweetly fragrant mignonettes
with raspberry ice cream Zen.
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11-29-2010, 05:11 PM
I picked some scented flowers today whilst skirting round the fen. Sweetly fragrant mignonettes with raspberry ice cream Zen.
11-29-2010, 07:51 PM
A witty and pleasent poem, like an intelligent limerick. The way you constructed the lines to rhyme "fen" and "Zen" whilst maintaining the rhythm was inspired.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
12-02-2010, 08:40 AM
thanks for the kind works jack
12-02-2010, 12:45 PM
that's a nice read first thing in the morning
12-03-2010, 01:19 PM
Light and sweet (excuse the puns!)
... nice one billy
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
12-04-2010, 05:02 AM
thanks for the kind words addy
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