05-27-2017, 04:39 PM
Had to delete this crap.
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05-27-2017, 05:55 PM
Hi, Brownlie, interesting meter going on.
 I especially like "the semen swirling in the shower" and "the world's cheating on you while you hump it", ain't that the truth.  Nice write.
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05-27-2017, 11:20 PM
Lol. Thanks for reading. Though, I sort of regret posting something about semen.
 
05-30-2017, 06:25 AM
I know, wtf. I wanted to read about the semen swirl... though, I think in my experience it's more like a snot rocket. -_- Kinda hangs on to the drain till you smoosh it down with your foot.
05-30-2017, 01:08 PM
"snot rocket" ... my world expands.
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06-10-2017, 06:06 PM
mmm...was pissed at lady friend. Then, i realized I liked her. So, I deleted.
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