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While I was busy writing,
spiders posted
lusty love letters
all over my house.
I destroy
lines of poetry,
erotic promises,
as I dust.
(I think they know we
writers will turn anything
into smut)
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To be fair, they do have a lot of legs to keep closed.
It could be worse
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JM, just ... yes. I always viewed spiders and webs in a very sinister light, and now it's going to break my heart to dust them away (once I figure out what dusting is ...

). And yes ... yes we do. A very enjoyable read.
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara
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Making spiderwebs sexy is quite an accomplishment! A nice, surprising twist
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(10-15-2016, 03:06 AM)lizziep Wrote: Making spiderwebs sexy is quite an accomplishment! A nice, surprising twist 
Strangely enough, it's found poem from a very odd conversation on Facebook. Poetry hides everywhere!
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spiders are traditionally symbolic of sexual repression. now for some bodily fluids.
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I'm a spider fan, much enjoyed, I hate breaking the webs though when they're in the house or across where people walk I have to, but they always rebuild. The ones by my dock ladder are always spectacular. Love letters

, I always thank them for catching the small bugs.
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Don't worry, spiders,
I keep house
casually
~Kobayashi Issa, translated by Robert Hass
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I've a spider-and-Issa poem in a journal early next year!

Wave-length coincided.