At the Junction

[Seanwd98]

Train cars are amassing-

           Don't be put off?

[Magpie]

Hi Sean, this probably would be better suited in the 'Short Poetry Forum'.
I'm kind of struggling to get anything from this, it feels as though it is a puzzle that needs solving and at the moment I am unable to solve it. I would include the title in the post with such a short poem so it reads as a three lined poem, which I'm sure was your intention anyway.
The last line reads as a question but could only be heard as a question with a rising intonation therefore I'm wondering if it should be in quotation marks. I'm intrigued as to what this is about.

Thanks for the read,

Mark

[Mark A Becker]

Hey Sean-

Hmmm. A question: why is the 2nd line a question?

It is very hard to read as question, because it just doesn't "sound out" like a question (which usually have a "rising" sound).

Very short ones have no room for sonic confusion, or maybe it's just that my eyes are hard of hearing.

Just sayin...
... Mark