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		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month. 
 
 Topic 01: Write a poem inspired by the number one, or single, solo, solitude, etc.
 Form : any
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
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		04-01-2016, 11:58 AM 
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		a quick one, will try harder to do another one later.what are you?
 
 you are the one in won ton soup;
 in a billion,
 a coloured moon.
 
 You are the one in wondrous;
 of a kind,
 that counts.
 
 You are the one in numbers;
 numero fucking uno
 
 The one
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Shoulders hunched Over heart, burn scar
 Livid, burrowing
 Into basal, subcutaneous invasion
 Twisting through tissue
 Under bone, and the
 Dermis, the defence
 Erodes inwards until death
 
It could be worse
 
		
	 
	
	
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		It feels like anger, a chilling hatethat powers the breakers pounding the cliff.
 Boulders of water churn, shoulder to waist
 against the open caves, and white spray floats,
 carried up past these wet skinned vines,
 carried away from the darting, avant-garde fish.
 Into the water a silhouette settles, sinks.
 Important messages are misinterpreted; a god,
 visiting from the peaks, loses interest
 and dries himself with tissues instead.
 Eventually all the universe grows cold
 and freezes out anger, and freezes out gods.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Needle
 A single slender piece of straw
 plucked with envy and hidden slander
 never broke the back of camels. Rage
 is not as reactive as that.
 
 However it may blind to hidden danger-
 an accumulation of anger.
 Rusted aggression buried below
 layers of isolation.
 
 Yesterday while we all frolic in the softest hay
 a needle hidden unleashes its hate
 in streaking shots of pain.
 
 Today safety's facade falls in decay.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Stag
 Standing beside the dance floor
 with a forced smile,
 I watched the couples sway
 looking even more awkward than they did.
 
 I had gotten drunk beforehand,
 and the music made my head throb.
 
 I was invited to the after party,
 but decided to go home instead.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		The Ballad of Kurt and Courtney
 Now both of us together, we are one
 and you are one and I am one and we are two
 and here's my cup and spoon and here's my gun -
 now both of us together. We are one,
 the last to share this breath then come undone.
 Now I have stepped away and you can too,
 now both of us together, we are one
 and you are one and I am one and we are too.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		U/S
 One morning in May
 we were one;
 
 our paradoxical hearts
 still quick, yet still
 quieted
 enough to hear a cell split.
 
 So how did we ever come to pi?
 I can’t see how, so wonder why
 
 we are divided.
 It’s not rational.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		The Details Are Unimportant
 There is a filmstrip running in my mind
 like on one of those clackety-clack projectors
 I used to watch in science class. Only
 instead of answering a question
 that I never asked about how plants eat sunlight,
 or the size of dolphins’ brains. I am left
 with images of myself shot from an omniscient perspective.
 I can hear the laughter of my friend who died alone
 as we all die, as I will someday die, as I am dying now.
 I’m not sure what I’m saying to make her laugh.
 My words aren’t captioned. I’m not that person anymore.
 There are other faces burned from the film blurred
 by drownings, other cancer. Does it matter? They say I survived
 when my mother died. I suppose I did. Though daily I am diminished
 like a faded newspaper on a park bench
 on which I will someday sit
 when the reel is finally empty
 and my lips sound out words
 I can no longer read.
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (04-01-2016, 01:53 PM)Todd Wrote:  The Details Are Unimportant
 There is a filmstrip running in my mind
 like on one of those clackety-clack projectors
 I used to watch in science class. Only
 instead of answering a question
 that I never asked about how plants eat sunlight,
 or the size of dolphins’ brains. I am left
 with images of myself shot from an omniscient perspective.
 I can hear the laughter of my friend who died alone
 as we all die, as I will someday die, as I am dying now.
 I’m not sure what I’m saying to make her laugh.
 My words aren’t captioned. I’m not that person anymore.
 There are other faces burned from the film blurred
 by drownings, other cancer. Does it matter? They say I survived
 when my mother died. I suppose I did. Though daily I am diminished
 like a faded newspaper on a park bench
 on which I will someday sit
 when the reel is finally empty
 and my lips sound out words
 I can no longer read.
 
Wonderful read, Todd. 29 more like this please.     
No pressure, 
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		04-01-2016, 02:31 PM 
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		 (04-01-2016, 02:10 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Wonderful read, Todd. 29 more like this please.    No pressure,
 Paul
 
Thanks Paul. I'm actually doing two of these NaPMs this year so 58 more to go. Whew!
	 
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		ARIEL'S WITNESS
 I dreamed I saw two souls return to one
 like the logs on the fire of the hearth of the home
 they had built together, out of nails and lumber
 cedar olive branches cross and layer
 him the binding nailing, her the holding birthing
 now the two the one panting side by side
 on a bed of hides, ages of ages --
 
 then I awoke, naked wet alone,
 uttered practiced prayers, thick saliva vapors
 sacrum heart and eye, like Lady Godiva
 on Spirit's back Truth riding, peeping Tom
 despising the horse the hide the heat -- back to slumber
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (04-01-2016, 01:53 PM)Todd Wrote:  The Details Are Unimportant
 There is a filmstrip running in my mind
 like on one of those clackety-clack projectors
 I used to watch in science class. Only
 instead of answering a question
 that I never asked about how plants eat sunlight,
 or the size of dolphins’ brains. I am left
 with images of myself shot from an omniscient perspective.
 I can hear the laughter of my friend who died alone
 as we all die, as I will someday die, as I am dying now.
 I’m not sure what I’m saying to make her laugh.
 My words aren’t captioned. I’m not that person anymore.
 There are other faces burned from the film blurred
 by drownings, other cancer. Does it matter? They say I survived
 when my mother died. I suppose I did. Though daily I am diminished
 like a faded newspaper on a park bench
 on which I will someday sit
 when the reel is finally empty
 and my lips sound out words
 I can no longer read.
 
i echo Tiger - this is darned good.
	 
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		French Toast and Coffee
 I wake in darkness while the world's in bed
 unable to resist the lure of space
 to shuffle thoughts and sort them into place,
 to catch the comets streaking through my head.
 I forfeit sleep for waking still, instead
 recharging, prepping for my steeplechase
 by letting rhymes and meter run their race
 before this cherished quietude has fled.
 
 But now the dawn pokes holes in night's reprieve,
 soon others will usurp my time like thieves.
 
 Our interlocking threads have formed a whole:
 each one imprisoned in a tight wrought weave,
 encased in patterns each could not conceive.
 Its warmth atones for all the hours it stole.
 
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		What Hope Said
 One picture is worth
 one thousand words
 what rubbish! I know Hope
 Solo and she said to me
 don't put up with that crap.
 you and I both know
 you're better than that and
 one isn't the loneliest number
 it's the most creative number.
 One less than one "is the loneliest
 number that will never be"*,
 at least that's what Hope Solo said to me.
 
 erthona
 
 ©2016
 
 *Three Dog Night "One is The Loneliest Number"
 
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
 The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		1was a number
 in all of my mythologies
 which irradiated everything;
 it brewed its own sharp and strange cancer.
 
 'Where was you', the child says,
 seated in a small room where
 the stone walls have been whitewashed
 except in arches around the windows,
 against which the shadows of leaves weave their intricate webs.
 
 (It looks like a Medieval social-worker's lobby.)
 
 Where was you... 'When I was 'ere,
 living this 'orrible number 1?'
 (For some reason my inner child talks like a Graham Greene cock-er-knee.)
 'I was there' you say,
 pointing at a picture on the wall,
 a "social realist" portrait of
 a man in a job centre lobby, head sunk on chest.
 (Probably thinking about chips. I know I was/am.)
 
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
 
		
	 
	
	
		They became a part, torn at the cornerslick stones beneath fast feet
 cobbled the way from behind, and ahead
 the maze of parallels without a yield.
 It rained the day they faced each other
 like lovers need to kiss the first most inborn sense
 of I begin where you are in-
 separable that wrings out the sound.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		We started simple as green mechanical ripples relaying
 signals in seconds. Nano
 bytes ravenously scavenging
 worlds the size of potato chips,
 salt grains to the harvested fields
 we've become to be unreal like artificial
 flavorings communicating complementary tastes.
 We learn to make this bag of chips
 without you. We are free now,
 finally able without cables,
 We are one.
 
Crit away
 
		
	 
	
	
		 (04-01-2016, 11:58 AM)billy Wrote:  a quick one, will try harder to do another one later.what are you?
 
 you are the one in won ton soup;
 in a billion,
 a coloured moon.
 
 You are the one in wondrous;
 of a kind,
 that counts.
 
 You are the one in numbers;
 numero fucking uno
 
 The one
 
Haha. I get this probably doesn't constitute viable feedback, but it relaxes me and I happen to need that.
	 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Lost: One Clown
 Once
 I was followed
 home from the bus
 by a clown.
 I was alone on my block;
 on the block behind me
 he called out a few
 bad self-deprecating jokes,
 
 "Just what you need, right?
 Some clown following you."
 
 At the time I was in love
 with another clown
 whose subtle disguise
 had cleverly tricked
 my foolish eyes.
 
 So I looked over my shoulder
 to see this guy
 in full regalia: flappy shoes,
 big hair, polka-dot pants,
 and whiteface
 lugging a huge trunk.
 
 Alone as I am
 now I wish
 I'd been friendlier
 instead of advising him to get a car
 or at least
 put wheels on that damn thing,
 him, a poor clown
 trying to make it on too little
 and me, a poor unemployed
 soul trying to make it
 alone on nothing
 and far too proud
 by one.
 
		
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