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The Girl of My Dreams rev RN

The Girl of My Dreams rev RN
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#1
02-16-2016, 02:36 AM
The Girl of My Dreams
 
I dreamed of you the other night,
it gave me such an awful fright,
so much so I awoke—
took hours to fall back to sleep,
I must have counted a million sheep,
with dread I fell asleep.
 
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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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02-16-2016, 03:04 AM
Ha, boogie girl got ya, I feel your pain.
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02-16-2016, 10:16 PM
Blank eyed girl.....
Note: "an" awful?
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02-17-2016, 03:28 AM
...black-eyed pea!
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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