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Through Glass (Edit #1)
Tetras
fletched of
cobalt and ruby
shoot through the water.
A tribe of poisoned darts
form a serpent, curving into
a bubbly helix to flow through
the same stone and sand, tracing
the same paths, blooming against their
fragile glass plates as infinite as shore break.
They follow their reflections across the equator.
The rippling filter becomes swallowed.
Joyfully adrift in the calm current,
Starlight beams bite the canopy,
gleaming fins crimson against
the tender green tendrils
of an Amazon stream.
And at dawn, a tribal
spirit sweat rises
into primordial
forest steam.
Edit: added punctuation
Original
In Glass
Tetras fletched of cobalt and ruby
shoot through the water.
A tribe of a hundred poisoned blow darts
curve into a bubbly helix.
An orchid blossoming then molting back,
They come and coalesce through the green
against their fragile plates of glass.
Flowing, swimming,
Swimming and flowing,
through the same stones and green
they’ve seen since their spawn,
tracing the same paths millions of times
as infinite as shore break.
As if quietly lullabied in the current,
tendril, waters of Amazonia,
they follow their reflections.
Little souls in the sound of a rippling filter,
calm me to sleep this night.
I've drifted into sameness
And yet soaked in my own complacency
I've followed, flowed,
Flowed and followed,
Only to awaken and lie awake
in the same unsettled state.
With fingers grazing my damp window,
I wonder in your stubborn grace.
Through Glass (Edit #1)
Tetras
fletched of
cobalt and ruby
shoot through the water.
A tribe of poisoned darts
form a serpent, curving into
a bubbly helix to flow through
the same stone and sand, tracing
the same paths, blooming against their
fragile glass plates as infinite as shore break.
They follow their reflections across the equator.
The rippling filter becomes swallowed.
Joyfully adrift in the calm current,
Starlight beams bite the canopy,
gleaming fins crimson against
the tender green tendrils
of an Amazon stream.
And at dawn, a tribal
spirit sweat rises
into primordial
forest steam.
Edit: added punctuation
Original
In Glass
Tetras fletched of cobalt and ruby
shoot through the water.
A tribe of a hundred poisoned blow darts
curve into a bubbly helix.
An orchid blossoming then molting back,
They come and coalesce through the green
against their fragile plates of glass.
Flowing, swimming,
Swimming and flowing,
through the same stones and green
they’ve seen since their spawn,
tracing the same paths millions of times
as infinite as shore break.
As if quietly lullabied in the current,
tendril, waters of Amazonia,
they follow their reflections.
Little souls in the sound of a rippling filter,
calm me to sleep this night.
I've drifted into sameness
And yet soaked in my own complacency
I've followed, flowed,
Flowed and followed,
Only to awaken and lie awake
in the same unsettled state.
With fingers grazing my damp window,
I wonder in your stubborn grace.
