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When listening to jazz with crooked ears,
laid back with cocktail buzzed associates
in a Manhattan shoebox near the square,
the city hears your tune, and plays along.
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The city really does play along, and no closing time.
Enjoyed, thanks for posting it.
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Yep, love that bop-bop-ditty of the city!
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Thanks for reading guys. This was just a fun attempt at writing a beat-inspired poem in blank verse (I think I succeeded, but I'm not sure), but I'm pretty happy with the result.