She broke her baby’s head off

[Erthona]

She broke her baby’s head off
 
She broke her baby’s head off,
I had to put it back on,
does that make me a god?
 
Would it help to know
she is two years old,
and the baby only plastic.
 
But, am I any less a god,
to her.
Or am I just,
Mommy



 


Erthona   
 
©2002

[just mercedes]

Great title! I remember the Doll's Hospital, where broken dolls went to be fixed.

[billy]

you're just mommy with balls

on a serious note, i like it though i think in an odd place it's a bit wordy.

the 2nd line i put it back for me would work better.
not sure the the 1st line of the 2nd adds anything.
i think with a poem such as this, brevity is the name of the game.