Bust
#1
Bust
 
Marijana Bust
Your Bust, in/out
make'em shout
Bust'em out
Bust'em in
Bust ya in the chops
Bust you down a grade,
Sir-yes-sir!
Why all this bustin'
can't we all just be friends?
I guess not in Ball-tea-no-more,
Gotta Bust some dark heads
Gotta Bust some pig heads.
Nope Rodney,
no one wanna be friends,
just wanna bust all these
god-damn fucking stupid heads;
bust'em 'til they're dead.
Then what?
Then I'll be happy.
 
(critiques/comments happily accepted, but not required)

Erthona
 
©2015
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#2
Your poem makes me sad. A good exploration of the meaning of a word, combined with social commentary. I thin k it's well done.
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#3
Thanks JM.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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