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#1
Five million images printed of
one prophet, all called Charlie.
The media never pointed out that tear.

tectak 2014
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#2
(01-15-2015, 08:39 AM)tectak Wrote:  Five million images printed of
one prophet, all called Charlie.
The media never pointed out that tear.

tectak 2014 2015, either that or you're the prophet.  Thumbsup
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(01-15-2015, 09:10 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  
(01-15-2015, 08:39 AM)tectak Wrote:  Five million images printed of
one prophet, all called Charlie.
The media never pointed out that tear.

tectak 2014 2015, either that or you're the prophet.  Thumbsup

That has got to be the coolest crit I ever had!
I think I'll leave it up...too much deleting going on.
Oddly enough, I DID beat the magazine on the Son of God piece reply to dale...Je suis Charlie et je suis Mohammed.
Best,
tectak
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#4
Yeah, I appreciate that.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#5
I like. You might title it "je suis...."
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#6
(01-16-2015, 02:02 AM)Leah S. Wrote:  I like. You might title it "je suis...."

Nah, it loses its sparticle.
tectak
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#7
"sparticle" Is that a bassoon or a monsoon?

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#8
I don't think you need that final line. Greater impact, for me, thus:

five million images
of one prophet
all called charlie


or is it

five million images
of one prophet
all called #charlie

??
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#9
(01-17-2015, 04:33 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  I don't think you need that final line. Greater impact, for me, thus:

five million images
of one prophet
all called charlie


or is it

five million images
of one prophet
all called #charlie
THE TEAR OF THE PROPHET IS QUINTESSENTIAL! (oops, didn't mean to shout, forgive me. Mohammed forgave. Tout est Pardonne. )This is a deeply profound cover page...or is it?
Huh tectak
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(01-17-2015, 04:09 AM)Erthona Wrote:  "sparticle" Is that a bassoon or a monsoon?

dale

You know what I mean, you pratt!
Best
tectak

but just in case.
article
sparkle
Sparticus
OMG, I just know I will regret this.
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