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The Last Halloween

The Last Halloween
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#1
10-30-2014, 12:36 AM
The Last Halloween

Twilight time, the ghouls unleashed,

like dark Santas in reverse,
to each house they drag their bags,
saying lines so oft rehearsed.

'Trick-or-Treat' means give me candy,
with each assault upon the doors,
flying like a pack of witches,
greedy to collect still more.

Sugar coma, the mighty fall,
still no worse than I have seen,
just the signal that we're through,
with this latest Halloween!


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10-30-2014, 12:54 AM
my daughter has sack load of stuff for the callers Sad
it's some scary shit Big Grin
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10-30-2014, 01:07 AM
My mom, the eternal dieter, bought a giant bagful, put it in a bowl days early and raids it in the middle of the night.

Treat's a trick.
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10-30-2014, 01:10 AM
that's what i'd be like.
dale just wants sex Big Grin
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10-30-2014, 04:00 AM
treats and tricks!
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

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#6
10-30-2014, 04:13 AM
I hate these Trick or Treaters, I really do. I'd sooner open my door to a Jehovah's Witness.
You've an aberrant apostrophe in Santas. I can't help it.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.
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10-30-2014, 07:38 AM
Ray,

Thanks for catching that. I changed that.

Dale
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