Harbor Morning

[danny_]

is short form free verse ok in here?

Harbor Morning
Rocking of boats.
Gray light awakens,
slow as the snail
crossing the planks.

[just mercedes]

is short form free verse ok in here?

Harbor Morning
Rocking of boats.
Gray light awakens,
slow as the snail
crossing the planks.

I like the way focus moves in your short poem - from boats out into the sky, then back into the close-up of slug.

[danny_]

thank you
just a little clippy. can't remember, probably came from like six pages of garbage that i narrowed down. xD