< the air today >

[rayheinrich]

                                                < the air today >
                                               
                                                the window
                                                as i open it
                                                the air today
                                                it seems to sing of you
                                                no
                                                none of this is true
                                                the mix of drifting dust
                                                the mustiness of us
                                                this window with its sun
                                                the air today
                                                it smells of breasts
                                                of yours
                                               
                                                        - - -
                                               






Image: "Isn't this where Tinkerbell's evil twin flies in?" - chopped, cropped, and photoshopped photograph
that I copied from wallpaperup.com and that was uploaded by user name: 'thegate'

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[billy]

i want to separate some of the lines and make it my poem.

it smells of breasts is perfect, though all i can recall when kissing one etc, is the smell of armpit

[ellajam]

the print of your bare feet
still mark the floor
thin cotton fabric
of your nightgown
blown back sheer
in the morning sun.


Beautiful photo, was the original not credited? Do you have a link? I'm curious to see how you've turned it. Good morning.

[rayheinrich]

the print of your bare feet
still mark the floor
thin cotton fabric
of your nightgown
blown back sheer
in the morning sun.

Nice poem... and you're telepathic !!!! (see original below)

Beautiful photo, was the original not credited? Do you have a link? I'm curious to see how you've turned it. Good morning.

I copied it from wallpaperup.com and it was uploaded by user name: 'thegate' who says it's public domain.

I looked around and found the original (reduced to fit):


The white rectangle is the part I used. I squeezed it horizontally, sharpened it, increased the contrast,
and added the gold coloring.


You can find the original full size one here