A verse from my song "number 1 girl in the world"

[kingmicahde]

The number one girl in the world
Is Nikki Boo my little pearl
I will get you anything your heart desires
You're super effective to me like water to fire
I still remember when you hit me in the lip with that ball
I made you kiss it to make it better that is what started it all
This is some real shit not like bird food
Because I never lied when I said I loved you
Your the keeper of my heart like I'm Davey Jones
And when you smile I melt like icecream cones
I'm a fool for that just like a clown
Because you baby girl have never let me down
I use to be a Mac apple bite me
But you changed all that you're my wifey
You're my Magic baby
Without you I go Rocket crazy
Your my number 1 girl your my Tracy McGrady





Hope you enjoy. Critic if you like, but tell me what lines you like.

[rowens]

You're super effective to me like water to fire

This is some real shit not like bird food

Your the keeper of my heart like I'm Davey Jones

I'm a fool for that just like a clown

Those are the lines I like. I might would like that Tracy McGrady line but I don't know.

[kingmicahde]

TMac Tracy Mcgrady was drafted to the orlando Magic as a rookie and then traded to the Rockets his nuimber was 1

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You're super effective to me like water to fire

This is some real shit not like bird food

Your the keeper of my heart like I'm Davey Jones

I'm a fool for that just like a clown

Those are the lines I like. I might would like that Tracy McGrady line but I don't know.

thank you

[rowens]

Tracy McGrady is a dude then? No wonder I wasn't feeling it.

[kingmicahde]

Well my wife is the magic and the number one girl in my life I would be out of control and crazy like a rocket without her. So the Tracy McGrady line works for me symbolically.

[rowens]

There's nothing wrong with that.