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stay gents
vented antecedence
spirit meadian quaffed
ascended ream noss, not
seems aloft, but for fuckity fox ache
punks abound ye, what a loss
numb enough, but cunts surround
lieing insidious cunts around on a wee vox
what shit crocket isling asinine conniving...
what alot of off poppy cock citing i've...
what a shock to the riped shots
along alighned eyed, i don on cabiri
trialing
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Hello Asyndetoff,
Appreciate the read, must say I don't get it. Just my preference, but I like poems that are understandable. What are you trying to say here? Give me a summary of what it means and I will try again. Best.
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Hi, made i slight error with the title. it's "Weave oxe" wee vox. A tiny telephone
the first line is a play on stage ents... kinda like saying stay good to scholars
since alot of knowledge i take to heart has come from often shamanic and dead peoples imput.
spirit median quaffed, is a shot at depicting customs that seperate the masses. in particular drug related ones.
the next stanza is written colloquial enough to question how formally i've taken to these consciousnes's.
ream noss is a play on oreamnos, the mountain goats.
alot of what i have come to know is most metaphysical, i'd rather speak in mythological or fauna contexts. hence goats. i also read goat as go-t. Or stop.
the third stanza just rolls off the tongue too perfectly. it has a shot at western customs of drinking too much and shitting down the necks of ripped off heads of those who know better by using other (illegal for the most part in most countrys) stuff.
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