Help(Not A Poem)
#1
Okay, this is not a poem. But, I need some help from you guys. I am entering a contest(and you can submit three poems) . I just wanted to know (which 3 poems) have been your favorite (I have posted links to the poems below) Also, If you want to see the new revised poem(after I fixed it up, I will post it on here) Thanks Wink

Top 5 poems(I have taken into consideration)

1. Disguise
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=552
2. Daze
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=616

3. Another Lonely Night
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=1007

4. Loathe
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=800

5. Lost
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=454

moved to the right section/mod Wink
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#2
(06-23-2010, 06:51 AM)Loveblind Wrote:  Okay, this is not a poem. But, I need some help from you guys. I am entering a contest(and you can submit three poems) . I just wanted to know (which 3 poems) have been your favorite (I have posted links to the poems below) Also, If you want to see the new revised poem(after I fixed it up, I will post it on here) Thanks Wink

Top 5 poems(I have taken into consideration)

1. Disguise
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=552
2. Daze
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=616

3. Another Lonely Night
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=1007

4. Loathe
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=800

5. Lost
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=454

moved to the right section/mod Wink
loathe 3rd, though i'd like to see the edit first.

lost 2nd, again the edited version please.

disguise 1st. as always i'd like the see any edit youve done LB.

just tack the edited poem onto the thread of the original with

EDIT

as the opening word. Wink
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#3
another lonely night,defenitely,any 2 of the rest
  • the partially blind semi bald eagle
Bastard Elect
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#4
Loathe should be included, as should Another Lonely Night. I don't decide which the third one should be ^^;
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#5
Thanks guys. I am adding in Loathe, Another Lonely Light, and thinking between (Lost or Disguise) . I`m leaning more towards Disguise. I`ll post the revised, later.
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#6
let's know if they do any good LB Wink
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#7
Loathe and Another Lonely Night! Smile

(BTW, I really like your disguise edit Smile)
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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