Audio: Brain Surgeon

[Wjames]

I just wrote this little tune today, it's unlikely to stay exactly like this forever, but I'd like to hear some feedback on it if possible (note, there's a minor fuck-up the first time through, but you can tell what it should be):




Chords:
C, E7, Am, D
C, E7, Am, D
C, Am, G, D
C, E7, G, D
throughout

Lyrics:

Why won’t you talk about, what you’re looking for?
Why can’t you live without, what you done before?
Close your eyes and drift away, tell me what you’ve got to say,
it’s in your head, it’s in your eyes, I’ll stay close and sympathize,
and pry, and try and pry again, tell me how you lost your friends.
You’ll duck and dodge, and slip away, I’ll pass time and get my pay,
so sit back down and talk real fast, I don’t think you’re gonna last,
if you don’t come again real soon, you’ll have even less to lose.

x2