11-27-2013, 07:27 AM
How many bottles
Will I swallow in my mind
Before it kills me?
Will I swallow in my mind
Before it kills me?
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Overdose
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11-27-2013, 07:32 AM
At first glance, I thought it said "buttholes" lol
Haikus usually have something to do with nature or seasons, and each line should represent its own thought. You can condense this poem into one or two lines, throw in a line about a dark autumn night or something, and BAM, great haiku. There's a great sticky floating around here somewhere about English haiku. You should check it out if you haven't.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair! |
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