Country Song
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The frost on the wind
met the chill up my spine,
in a cold country inn
with five bottles of wine.
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(10-25-2013, 11:22 AM)Wjames Wrote:  The frost on the wind
met the chill up my spine,
in a cold country inn
with five bottles of wine.

It rhymes well (not too cliche), and I liked the image that I saw in my head. There's not much there there. I'd love to see some background as to why the voice is (I presume) an alcoholic (or at least, why he's got five bottles of wine).
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