My Song

[kath3]

My Song

Welcoming your presence
I resonate with your words
a sweet melody holds you
reaching, touching, soothing
my inner depths

Perhaps cliche again but it's getting me started.

[billy]

a good starter poem, well done kath

[heslopian]

The penultimate line was very clever; I like how you structured the poem so that those three verbs would appear alongside each other. It is cliche, but that's a good thing, I think; it plays on the most familiar parts of our imaginations, creating a warm and happy song.