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Lost
count of whores
smoking cigarettes
longer than my dick, I paid
attention to thirteen bald
spots on her ungroomed,
pus-ridden
snatch.
This is what happens when I try to write something pretty.
I'll be there in a minute.
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a pretty poem indeed
i think i had a girlfriend like this
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eeewwwww, but great poem, clearly heard. Hope I don't have that image hopping around my brain all day.
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If I did anything right today, it was trolling PigPen with an image of a dirty vagina.
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(09-16-2013, 07:06 PM)newsclippings Wrote: Lost
count of whores
smoking cigarettes
longer than my dick, I paid
attention to thirteen bald
spots on her ungroomed,
pus-ridden
snatch.
This is what happens when I try to write something pretty.
Awesome and I liked form, except for the image you have just burnt on my retina, and the fact that all I can think is that I would want to squeeze the puss out of the spots 35711753 would have looked like a sideways.... sorry I'll leave it there. TOMH
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Hahahahahaha. Yeah. I should reformat it.
Lost count of
whores smoking cigar-
ettes longer than my dick, I
paid
at
tention to thirteen bald spots
on her ungroomed pus
ridden snatch.
Almost, right?
I'll be there in a minute.