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#1
12-26-2009, 08:31 PM
Beautiful baby
all dressed in red
The bottle stands empty
dawn is not yet
Wish you were here still
hard to forget
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#2
12-27-2009, 12:51 PM
not a poem that needs a crit. specially if it's personal.
the 3rd line is poignant
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#3
12-27-2009, 01:26 PM
thanks Bill
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