Agoraphobia
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Agoraphobia
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a thousand faces
and twice as many eyes

drawing nearer is the moment
that i know inside and out

a thousand feelings
and twice as many doubts

aproaching the door to my house
i know its inside
i never stay out long
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Agoraphobia - Fear of open spaces or of being in crowded, public places like markets. Fear of leaving a safe place.


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#2
i know i'd hate to suffer from any phobia.
thanks for the poem dubs.
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#3
did ya read my other one bill


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#4
You put across your phobia pretty well. I like the structure "a thousand/ and twice as many". I liked it.

Thanks for the read Wink.
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#5
not bad Dubs,where's the other one?
  • the partially blind semi bald eagle
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#6
here
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=1138


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#7
(06-03-2010, 07:44 AM)DUBLIN5 Wrote:  did ya read my other one bill
yep dubs, i read and respond to every poem posted (sometimes it takes a bit of time but i get there eventually) i am glad to see one of the sewer rats posting a poem beside SJ.
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#8
lol the cheek sewer rat i do have loads but just remembering them is another thing


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(06-03-2010, 12:32 PM)billy Wrote:  
(06-03-2010, 07:44 AM)DUBLIN5 Wrote:  did ya read my other one bill

yep dubs, i read and respond to every poem posted (sometimes it takes a bit of time but i get there eventually) i am glad to see one of the sewer rats posting a poem beside SJ.

I do post a poem once or twice every 3/4 months. I just cannot find the inspiration Blush.

Sorry for the off-topic, but it is nice to see more and more poetry on the forum Smile.
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#10
(06-02-2010, 09:35 PM)DUBLIN5 Wrote:  Agoraphobia
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a thousand faces
and twice as many eyes

drawing nearer is the moment
that i know inside and out

a thousand feelings
and twice as many doubts

aproaching the door to my house
i know its inside
i never stay out long
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Agoraphobia - Fear of open spaces or of being in crowded, public places like markets. Fear of leaving a safe place.

Very well expressed. I know this fear all to well as I have a fear of leaving a safe place. Becoming a prisioner of fear in any form is crippling.
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.
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