The Death of Me
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The Death of Me
Slowly, I gather my strength.
I will need it for the immunization.
Quietly, I am shaken with quivers.
Thinking clearly, I calm myself throughout
Waiting for the end with no worries.
With the immunization injected within,
My mind and body meltdown.
My life will live on through
the death of me.

"To the well-organized mind,
death is but the next great adventure."
-J.K. Rowling

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#2
"My life will live on" will go down as the worst line I have read in a poem this month.
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#3
thanks for posting it in miscellaneous :J:
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(07-30-2013, 05:47 PM)billy Wrote:  thanks for posting it in miscellaneous :J:

Billy,
You're welcome. Lol.
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