adventures of brisco country junior.

[Bunx]

oh wow, what the fuck is a date.
a prune in june you mean? gross.
i hate those. oh a date. cat date?
with a kitten?! a girls kitten?!?!!

miko! that is her name! ill have a daughter
i'll give water and lots of high fives. fuck
i may have cat "dates" (barf) with
babies all the time.

watch out for that hairball miko,
and never hide to too. because miko
baby kitty, your so cute. you will see
the wilderness too! adou adou
i dont know what that means.
but i hope it means. ill miss you!

"Don't you miss Becca Brisco?"
I asked looking down.

Briskey said "MEOW." loud
and proud.

[Brownlie]

oh wow, what the fuck is a date.
a prune in june you mean? gross.
i hate those. oh a date. cat date?
with a kitten?! a girls kitten?!?!!

miko! that is her name! ill have a daughter
i'll give water and lots of high fives. fuck
i may have cats "dates" (barf) with
babies all the time.

watch out for that hairball miko,
and never hide to too. because miko
baby kitty you so cute. you will see
the wilderness too! adou adou
i dont know what that means.
but i hope it means. ill miss you!

"Don't you miss Becca Brisco?"
I asked looking down.

Briskey said "MEOW." loud
and proud.

I'm getting a flippant tone in this . Is kitten a euphemism for puss? I would like you to try and learn some meter. I found trying some formal stuff rewarding and I am still a novice in many regards. BTW I like that you stick up for babies

[Bunx]

i have taken AP english and done many a structured rhyme. i know the basics of meter stressed and un-stressed. alot of the poems i post on here are simply me rambling in free verse. thanks for the suggestion. i shall take your advise tomorrow

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does flippant mean sassy?
kind of?

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as far a figurative language. brisco is really my cat. the poem is actually super true and literal