Dolphin Waves

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Dolphin Waves


His mind will lift me to the stars---
His collaborative themes are reality’s themes,
His mirroring auras half my own!

In hybrid swells, subliminally sent,
It echoes out from their inner core
How he thrives in their depths and listens,

How majestically interned,
He aligns the mandates of the midway mind
With the higher promptings of the central mind---

How keenly attuned to their hybrid will
He disembarks from both at once!

[R.C. KITCHENS]

Dolphin Waves


His mind will lift me to the stars---
His collaborative themes are reality’s themes,
His mirroring auras half my own!

In hybrid swells, subliminally sent,
It echoes out from their inner core
How he thrives in their depths and listens,

How majestically interned,
He aligns the mandates of the midway mind
With the higher mandates of the central mind----

How keenly attuned to their hybrid will
He disembarks from both at once!

I think you can build on this piece and with some imagery it would be better.

"In hybrid swells, subliminally sent,
It echoes out from their inner core
How he thrives in their depths and listens"

I like this.