Rough Morning?

[Quixilated]

I really liked this. New to the critique and this wouldn't be in any poetry book I'd typically pick up but it felt like a feeling I've felt before. Somewhere between mad and sad and confused and lonely. Mourning

Hey, Dan, welcome to the pigpen.  We are always very happy to see new members.  

Please be advised that the above post is not considered sufficient critique even for the basic forum.  Please try to go more in-depth in your feedback when you are in the workshops (especially since you are posting your own poem in the moderate critique forum). 

Thank you,
—Quix/admin

[Bunx]

Hey Dan. This is the first poem I wrote in the pen ❤️❤️ appreciate you. Think about why you relate to this and how it could be improved or strengthen