WTC Memorial edit

[Knot]

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Hi Bryn.
Very nice,
perhaps just a little trim?


Rough barked oaks
in ordered vigil. ..................... not sure what these lines add (given the title) - I'd be tempted to cut them and begin with


Hearts break by degrees

touching three thousand names
etched into the margin, the soul

of a nation, the world. Infinite tears
cascade down walls. A hole

that cannot be filled.



Best, Knot


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