Axe Problems

[billy]

the last long lined stanza came as a bit of a surprise. while reading the piece i was gripped. so much so that i couldn't think what to say in the feedback i was due to give. in the 1st stanza all i saw were traffic cones for some inane reason; after that i got lost in the reading. i can't put into words what i'm thinking, i see Indians and rockers and butlers and guitars and god knows what else that is or isn't there. i had no idea charlie o was mj though i did see chucky as jimmy osmond then thought better of it, i can't for the life of me see mj i see memories and nostalgia;gia and a little bit of real friendship. i've read it quite a few times and am no nearer to any kind of sensible feedback except to say it was a pleasure to behold

thanks for the read.