07-13-2012, 08:47 AM
Charlie O, Chucky Osmond and myself are all about the same age, but in the first case talent doesn't trump morality, in the second morality doesn't trump lack of talent, and in my case, well I had not much of either 
To die onstage, or to die in bed, I suppose are much the same, especially when both are off Broadway.
I don't see anything particularly worrying here except for the change from long to short lines, and the overall obscurity in your references, and while it may be amusing to the writer (I am guilty of this myself), it will not gain you much in readership.
Peace and love baby!
Dale
To die onstage, or to die in bed, I suppose are much the same, especially when both are off Broadway. I don't see anything particularly worrying here except for the change from long to short lines, and the overall obscurity in your references, and while it may be amusing to the writer (I am guilty of this myself), it will not gain you much in readership.
Peace and love baby!
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.