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Legacy Lost
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07-11-2012, 10:05 PM
The innocence leaks away - the memories are whitewashed away.
I think you'd have a better poem if the 2nd were analogous to the first. Dryness, dust, desert spring to mind.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-11-2012, 06:10 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by don miguel - 07-11-2012, 07:32 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by billy - 07-11-2012, 08:56 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-11-2012, 08:56 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by addy - 07-11-2012, 10:25 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-11-2012, 11:44 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by addy - 07-11-2012, 04:57 PM
RE: Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-11-2012, 10:42 PM
RE: Legacy Lost - by penguin - 07-11-2012, 10:05 PM
RE: Legacy Lost - by don miguel - 07-12-2012, 04:58 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-12-2012, 10:19 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by tectak - 07-13-2012, 12:19 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by penguin - 07-13-2012, 12:50 AM
RE: Legacy Lost - by Erthona - 07-13-2012, 02:30 AM
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