07-10-2012, 05:32 AM
Hello poetry friends! I'm new here but not new in poetry in general, although I mostly write poems in Swedish. Today I wrote this poem and choose to register here to post. It would be fun to hear your opinion - negative, constructive as well as positive! The poem is partly autobiographical - I mean the first part is true and the the last part just my imagination as how things could be. Because of the semi autobiographical character I became puzzled if I should delete it or not. I realized then that my dreams and desires are somehow also completely autobiographical cause they are emotions and urges. Or something like that. I hope you like the poem! But I somehow think my poems gets a bit pathetic. But it's better to write to become good! Enjoy!
Quote:We don't talk anymore
Am I hopeless who causes heartless pain?
I ask for myself
Why our love quickly vanished
Was everything a brief moment?
I wonder as I wander
In the lonely streets
I come back home
And write what I like
Read and relax myself with Merlot wine
I pick up the telephone and tell you:
Enough is enough!
I'm coming home to you and only you
You say yes and you let me in
My kiss then touches the north
and then the south
of your lips
Then I touch the west
and then the east
of your rosy cheeks
Our languishing body at last meets
Tonight we too are one
The night is eternally ours!
And the room is on passionate fire
And our hearts trembles forever more.