Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur

[Indie]

I've been thinking about this poem, and the more I look at it, the more I dislike it. I haven't worked out how to remedy it without a complete overhaul, which I don't want to do. My other overhaul while better on an artistic level left me cold on an emotional level, and I can't even look at it now. So I'm going to leave this one on the back burner and maybe one I'll come back to it.