06-28-2012, 02:37 AM
I think this very beautiful -- right through. I just wonder if you considered 'in' rather than 'into' at the beginning? I see that it it is more lucid as it stands, and there would be a nuanced change in meaning, but having hit on that, I further wondered, for reasons which I can't explain, whether 'in absolutions' -plural would give it something. But--apart from my suggestions -- please don't go mucking around with it.
Btw, I am worried about you. Yes! 'If you label me, you negate me', you say. Having just labelled yourself 'Administrator'. I had thought that you were concentrating on other stuff; now I suspect you of being like those Victorian ladies, who would go into a decline.
Btw, I am worried about you. Yes! 'If you label me, you negate me', you say. Having just labelled yourself 'Administrator'. I had thought that you were concentrating on other stuff; now I suspect you of being like those Victorian ladies, who would go into a decline.