Little Feather Dove

[ksinll]

just a thought Ksinll;

have you thought about posting in the mild critique forum till you find your feet. the feedback in this spot can be particularly hazardous to poets who have yet grown their skin to a required thickness

I've appreciated the comments here and I think it will help me revise the poem and make it better. I think comments like "humbled mess" are a little out of line though and so I probably will delete my account. It seems like serious critique can be done without name-calling but maybe the members on this board do not know the difference.