The Student

[billy]

Bottles of vodka line her window ledge
at various stages of emptiness.
Reports of some sort cling to each neck
measuring degrees of drunkenness.
She studies alone, each experiment
must be free from external influence.
Last night she finally drank to the dregs
and threw her conclusions up over the bed.
This morning she’s doubting the evidence;
scientific research has gone to her head.

i think the rhyme scheme is a bit off. abcbd efgf which could be sorted out with another line that doesn't rhyme.

the title in this is one of those instances where it really works. the internal rhyme works in L3 but the words feel forced a little.
would something like;

Reports of abuse cling to each neck (just a suggestion)

i think it could be paired down a tiny bit though i really am being nit picky. i like the setting the title the content and how they all work together to give a solid image of student life (for some students) i enjoyed the read.

thanks.