06-20-2012, 11:03 AM
Thanks for the feedback Bilbo
I'll remove the "and" change the previous comma to a semi-colon.
I thought this ended too abruptly too. I'm not sure what I'd put in another stanza though. I really like your idea about italics. A lot of novelists I've read do that.
I'll remove the "and" change the previous comma to a semi-colon.I thought this ended too abruptly too. I'm not sure what I'd put in another stanza though. I really like your idea about italics. A lot of novelists I've read do that.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe