Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur

Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur

Indie

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#12

05-31-2012, 06:14 PM

Yeah, I was unsure on the last two lines and agreed the garden of roses is rather cliched. I'll have a crack at another edit in the next couple of days. Thanks again Billy.

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Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 05-19-2012, 06:08 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 05-19-2012, 06:09 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 05-20-2012, 08:52 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by addy - 05-21-2012, 09:48 AM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 05-21-2012, 03:25 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by tectak - 05-21-2012, 07:12 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 05-22-2012, 05:38 AM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 05-22-2012, 11:40 AM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 05-22-2012, 06:29 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by tectak - 05-22-2012, 06:39 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 05-31-2012, 04:06 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 05-31-2012, 06:14 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Universalchild - 06-06-2012, 08:26 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 06-07-2012, 11:05 AM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 06-07-2012, 10:55 AM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by Indie - 07-01-2012, 09:25 PM

RE: Amare et sapere vix deo conceditur - by billy - 07-02-2012, 11:58 AM

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